xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted July 5, 2011 Posted July 5, 2011 i swear by now i should just give up give in, stop running, stop filling this cup i swear by now i should have just learned but because of my stupidity this is what i've earned i should know by now it will all never be enough everything i try turns out so unreal, so rough i try to fix and mend then we just break and bend then i start to cry and i believe every lie every whim and every need and i'm still here for you even though its not honesty you heed i can't help but by your to side be true i should have known long ago that you feed on another's woe but now i'm reeled in and yours to keep and others ask why i do not weep the truth is that i love you and no matter what i always do i do everything to make you smile i do everything to keep you awhile now my question to those who question me would all of you give up love so easily or would you fight for every battle in sight to keep that loved one until the war was done when someone gets so close to your heart you can't help but fall apart the trick is to keep your pieces tied in a knot so you can stay strong until you aquire what you sought love isn't something you can just walk away from love isn't something you can hide under liquor and rum love doesn't come easy to most but those who are willful become it's host i had to learn this the hard way but for you i keep this pain at bay prepare your cannons, load your rifles if it comes for you, you will need such trifles like i said its not a war won so unstrained but it's worth the fight, and for all you have trained
kingdomkid1 Posted July 5, 2011 Posted July 5, 2011 Awesome poem. Always great, never a disappointment. Luv is worth fighting for, and its worth suffering for. I shuld know if anyone does, so i know wat im saying wen i say brilliant piece of work
endofgreen15 Posted July 5, 2011 Posted July 5, 2011 Sammy your poems are absolutely amazing. Im Always looking forward to reading more of your poems. You are an amazing writer!! I so wish I could write like you!!
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted July 8, 2011 Author Posted July 8, 2011 awh thank you guys... idk my writing has gotten a little rough around the edges lately, im never sure if it's ever good or not.. i usually dont feel like its very great, but im always happy to hear when people like it
kingdomkid1 Posted July 8, 2011 Posted July 8, 2011 I feel the same way, its natural, but u r brilliant, so let that ease ur mind wen writing
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