lex. Posted July 15, 2011 Posted July 15, 2011 i hope you step on the glass of my shattered heart on the floor; you found someone better, i'm no use to you anymore. i hope you whither up in guilt in the darkest of night, and it creeps up behind you and crawls up your spine. i want the pain of you knowing that you cause my deathe, to eat at your soul 'till you draw your final breath. i hope you know that the rain, coming down on your head, is me up in heaven with every painful teardrop i shed. i hope the fire in your heart burns out knowing im gone; as you search for an escape, but every turn you make is wrong. the voices in your head, you know that is me? ill whisper you thoughts you wont wanna belive. im back from the dead and im not gonna leave! ill drive you insande till you cut die and bleed.[/font]
lex. Posted July 15, 2011 Author Posted July 15, 2011 thanks. i want people to comment it because i don't know if it's good or not.. and if i should write more. because if its lame i don't want to.
~Lexxi~ Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 No, it's really great. I've been there and felt that pain I love the feeling you put into it
lex. Posted July 16, 2011 Author Posted July 16, 2011 well thank you, there really is a lot of feeling behind it.
~Lexxi~ Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 I can tell. I'm actually working on a poem right now about some issues I've delt with but I dont think its as good as yours so I'm hesitant to post it. I'm not a big fan of negative critisism lol but anyways the pain in it is absolutely marvelous but I'm sorry if you had to go through an experience like that
lex. Posted July 16, 2011 Author Posted July 16, 2011 haha well you should post it. i posted other ones that i made up in like 30 seconds just because it gets emotions out. and its all goood, things like that only make you stronger
~Lexxi~ Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 I might. It just came out in a splur a few moments ago. Writing and drawing help me stop the tears from falling. And yes its better to learn from the painful experiences. Also I checked out some of your others, theyre really good
lex. Posted July 16, 2011 Author Posted July 16, 2011 gahh i wish i could draw. and yeah im just on a poem writing spreee tonight aha
~Lexxi~ Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 I've started and I cant stop x) btw i would love it if you'd check out my post of some of my drawing and let me know what you think ^^
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