My Shitty Poem..

[SpitefulSoul]

My foolish mind..

How could it not see?

You weren’t what I thought you were..

The lies, uncanny.

You never loved me.

Why continue?

You should have stopped this long ago.

Instead of leading me on,

And forcing me to now go.

It’s not fair.

Do you even care?

It’s hardly likely.

Because you’re the one that broke me.

I despise you.

With every last cell of my being.

You repulse me.

Uncannily.

I hope you suffer.

I hope you perish.

I hope you and your new love relinquish.

Your “True Love”…

You disgust me.

With every last horrid morsel of your repugnant self.

I hope you wither,

And I hope you die.

Die inside,

From all the unrequited hurt you've caused.

Breathe your last breath now,

As I forever cast you away

To a place where demons stay.

Where they’ll rip you apart.

And make you cry.

And make you understand all of the hurt you’ve caused to me.

Because you don’t care.

You don’t bother to consider my emotions.

No.

You can’t propel away.

For my being shall forever remain

In your pitiful brain.

I hope it stays there forever.

And ever.

So you can be immortally tortured by me.

For all of eternity.

[~Lexxi~]

Shitty? I loved it. You should continue to write I thought this was fantastic

[gabbitheawesome]

i agree with lexxi...that was amazing

[XxDarkEmoAngelOfDeathxX]

it is realy good i dont get why it would be shitty

[-razorromance-]

Anger is great fuel for writing...which is me saying you should continue to write.