Emokittenz Posted August 8, 2011 Posted August 8, 2011 Why must you point out my flaws When yours are so much more? You're just calling me a liar? Well, I'm calling you a whore. Truth is your heart is much too cold. And, frankly, your bullshit's gotten old. Love you? Yeah I did. But who am I but a dumbass kid? Hate you? Yes, I do. So just like you did, I'm saying, "Fuck You." Comments? Critique?
AllTheyCisScarsSixx Posted August 8, 2011 Posted August 8, 2011 I love this. You are an amazing writer and I like your style. Keep posting more
Emokittenz Posted August 8, 2011 Author Posted August 8, 2011 (edited) Thank you so much! Edited August 8, 2011 by Emokittenz
MidnightAngel7 Posted August 9, 2011 Posted August 9, 2011 I like it. I can definitely say it's... very straight to the point. Lol.
SadBlackAngel Posted August 9, 2011 Posted August 9, 2011 (edited) i love it to, it's a sort poem but whit a lot emotion, keep writing! Edited August 9, 2011 by SadBlackAngel
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