back then

[mikkaylah-blackheart x_x]

do you remember what it was like ,

back then,

side by side you and me forever ,

never apart,

love for each other was all we had ,

all wanted,

 

I needed you to live and breathe,

my light in the dark,

you made my pain fade away,

in to the dark of the night,

 

our eyes gazed at each other,

and as our lips met,

I knew in my heart this was a moment,

not to forget,

 

do you remember what happened next,

our forever ended fast ,

you left you had to go you had to leave ,

the dark took you in ,

 

thats why I wonder ,

where ever you are ,

do you remember me ?

like I remember you.

[mikkaylah-blackheart x_x]

this is my first pome ever , feedback pls ?

[EG Tommy]

Very good. +1

[mikkaylah-blackheart x_x]

Very good. +1

 

thanks

[endofgreen15]

Wow that's really good, I like it alot

[mikkaylah-blackheart x_x]

thanks

[zredtide]

this is my first pome ever , feedback pls ?

 

Awwww..... I love it. )

[pinupdoll]

Awesome! Dark and depressing! My two fave qualities in poetry.