Before Its Too Late

[ConfusedSmileyChloe]

This is a song...

 

all we had was a silly notion,

something unspoken,

something beautiful and rare,

now were no longer in motion.

 

my hearts seemed to cease its beating,

and what is all this anger im seeing?

im running, running, away

running, running, away...

 

this is what happens when,

you stop believing,

stop your dreaming,

you start bleeding.

its on the ground,

on the floor,

what the hell am i even looking for?

what am i looking for?

 

we used to whisper softly,

kiss so gently,

now i think thats my name youre screaming.

whats this note supposed to be meaning?

 

if you wanna hate me,

go on and hate me.

im running, running away,

running, running away...

 

this is what happens when

you stop believing,

stop your dreaming,

you start bleeding.

its on the floor,

what the hell am i even looking for?

what am i looking for?

 

scream my name,

throw it in my face.

its the last time we'll ever feel the same...

Edited September 6, 2011 by EmptyGirl16

[punk301]

Hmm its a nice piece of work, though you repeat yourself a bit, which can bore the reader a bit

[ConfusedSmileyChloe]

Its a song again smartie :]

[endofgreen15]

I love this!!

[punk301]

Hahaha maybe I should have read the top lol

[XxDeathAngelxX]

nice i love it

[Capn_Chantal]

this is terrific. wish I could write something as awesome as this :3