jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Posted October 5, 2011 (edited) This poem I wrote in 30 mins because a very good friend was feeling down and I thing she is such an amazing person so I don't like when shes sad >.< It really helped her but like umm I get a lot of crap about it being a bad poem but like I gave it 30 mins so take it easy on me lol... hope you enjoy... -Star- Look at you now I told you they would see Beauty that was hiding this whole time underneath An ordinary girl who is bound to break free Bound to break silence, and make the people sing Of an ordinary girl with unordinary dreams But despite what they see, I think your pretty unique And when you feel low look to the sky, your not alone Your going to shine bright Your a star in the sky And with a glimmer in their eyes They tilt their heads high And they can't believe whats in sight You'll put on a show, an unforgettable night Look at you now Your a star in the sky And like every star before you Your meant to shine bright But you shine with your unique light So go ahead and give them an unforgettable night Edited October 5, 2011 by jacob c(:
Guest Vampire Puppet Posted October 5, 2011 Posted October 5, 2011 wow once again this is great, i liked your song better though, just my opinion
jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Author Posted October 5, 2011 Thank you xD lol N yeah the song is totally better x)
Guest Vampire Puppet Posted October 5, 2011 Posted October 5, 2011 *gasp* how do you know i'm a kitty??? STALKER!!!
jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Author Posted October 5, 2011 Lmao!! I'm a cat that's why I meowed lol...
jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Author Posted October 5, 2011 Hey thats a bat!! Ahhh * gets pillow n swings at the bat* haha... you tricked me! bats don't meow!!
Guest Vampire Puppet Posted October 5, 2011 Posted October 5, 2011 no it's not, it's an innocent little kitty how dare you swing a pillow at it
jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Author Posted October 5, 2011 Oh... but the pillow was soft the Kitty smiled x)
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