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This poem I wrote in 30 mins because a very good friend was feeling down

and I thing she is such an amazing person so I don't like when shes sad >.<

It really helped her but like umm I get a lot of crap about it being a bad poem

but like I gave it 30 mins so take it easy on me lol... hope you enjoy...

 

-Star-

Look at you now

I told you they would see

Beauty that was hiding this whole time underneath

An ordinary girl who is bound to break free

Bound to break silence, and make the people sing

Of an ordinary girl with unordinary dreams

But despite what they see, I think your pretty unique

And when you feel low

look to the sky, your not alone

Your going to shine bright

Your a star in the sky

And with a glimmer in their eyes

They tilt their heads high

And they can't believe whats in sight

You'll put on a show, an unforgettable night

Look at you now

Your a star in the sky

And like every star before you

Your meant to shine bright

But you shine with your unique light

So go ahead and give them an unforgettable night

Edited by jacob c(:
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Posted

wow once again this is great, i liked your song better though, just my opinion

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Posted

*gasp* how do you know i'm a kitty??? STALKER!!!

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Posted

oh....ok, :P Meow! <(^w^)>

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Posted

no it's not, it's an innocent little kitty how dare you swing a pillow at it

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