Guest chloeisme! Posted October 12, 2011 Posted October 12, 2011 This is a kind of mini-story i suppose. I hope you like it. A knife cold and smooth pressed against my scar scattered arm. I feel the blade break my skin but feel no hint of hurt as the pain inside me numbs my body. I feel the pulse as i see the deep red liquid drain out of my body. I bury it deep in my arm hoping relief will come soon and it does. First the dizziness. The letters on the page of the upturned notebook swim They blur together and form dark spots almost resembling inkblots. Second the darkness. The faces on the pictures on my wall disappear the floor turns into a blackhole. My eyes drown in the darkness. I feel myself slipping my memories slide away my weary brain shuts down. My eyes flutter open. Im standing in some strange hallway. I glance down at my arm the only thing there is pale skin no trace of anything i had ever done no remnants of my sins. I pause look up and see two doors. I cautiously walk afraid of what is ahead. I reach them. The door on the right is a bright white like a new pearl but so white its almost translucent. The silver nameplate in the middle hold one word heaven. I look to my left and its not pretty compared to what i just saw. Rotted almost blackened wood like a dead tree. I cannot read the name on this one for its scratched and dirty gray unlike the other gleaming silver one. I reach for the right doors handle i turn it but it does not open. I push i pull nothing. Stupidly i go to the left door and turn its handle. It opens with ease. I see darkness. I feel my body being pulled into it. I try to stop but fail. I clutch the door i dont want to go but the door gives in and i fall into the shadows. Voices. People talking. My eyes open and i see a blinding light. Faces appear. I glance at my surroundings. A heart monitor. An IV. Its a hospital. I realized what the word must have been on the left door. Hell.
Thatemokid99 Posted October 14, 2011 Posted October 14, 2011 I really like your poem. Or at least as close as I'm going to get to liking something.
Capn_Chantal Posted October 14, 2011 Posted October 14, 2011 i read it all the way to the bottom and honestly, I had a hard time dealing with the fact that it was done. it was literally that awesome :3
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