Naraku101 Posted October 12, 2011 Posted October 12, 2011 hey all this is the first part of a song that is pretty brutal thinking about turning it into an actual death metal song but want i opinions please and let me know if i should post the second part of it WELCOME TO HELL pt1 Welcoming the new born baby the docter pulls you out The dark hole that you have resided in for 9 months is gone As the docter grasps your tiny head Darkness floods the area Hells ripper enters the room Through the cracks and seems in the doors He blocks the light from the windows And blackens the white of the aprons And goldens the blood on their hands The baby is pushed back in the woman The ripper enters the womb Your little eyes open to see the ripper Ready to carry to down to the pits of your new realm He takes one look at you then slits your insides Watching the guts pour out Screams fill the womb Mother hears the baby cry in sheer pain The docters and nurses Paralyzed in fear Mommy screams out for baby Baby screams for mommy Nothing can save you now baby The ripper is here and you must come to hell The sythe of death enters your skull Crushing your brain Popping your eyes out Liquifying your mind The angels can not help you You are damned to slave for all eternity Welcome to hell...
Guest Jessie-Jinx Posted October 13, 2011 Posted October 13, 2011 scary... i like it. where is it from??
XIwishIcouldRememberThisX Posted October 14, 2011 Posted October 14, 2011 ..the baby part is kinda awk..but other than that, i like i
Naraku101 Posted October 24, 2011 Author Posted October 24, 2011 i wrote it in 2008 i have a second part to it to which is more intense
Cassie Marie Posted October 25, 2011 Posted October 25, 2011 woah that pretty intence you should most deff post the second part its deff somthing i would listen to
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