Im bored heres a POEM! #4

[Raised For Slaughter]

I ne'er was struck before that hour

With love so sudden and so sweet,

Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower

And stole my heart away complete.

 

My face turned pale as deadly pale,

My legs refused to walk away,

And when she looked, what could I ail?

My life and all seemed to turn to clay.

 

And then my blood rushed to my face

And took my eyesight quite away,

The trees and bushes round the place

Seemed midnight at noonday.

 

I could not see a single thing,

Words from my eyes did start -

They spoke as chords do from the string,

And blood burnt round my heart.

 

Are flowers the winter's choice?

Is love's bed always snow?

She seemed to hear my silent voice,

Not love's appeals to know.

 

I never saw so sweet a face

As that I stood before.

My heart has left its dwelling-place

And can return no more.

[Guest Jessie-Jinx]

wow... this is great

[Guest TiffehRipzUrHeartOutUchiha]

Lovingg it

[inyourskinnies]

You're such a great writer that's so not fair :3

[Raised For Slaughter]

Thanks all, im really not that great i just have a heart full of feelings

[Guest TiffehRipzUrHeartOutUchiha]

Hun you are really good