Guest chloeisme! Posted October 31, 2011 Posted October 31, 2011 This is a short story-like piece i recently wrote. Hope you enjoy :] Pretty, unseen Lying there. Pristine Her pale curls fall on equally colorless skin. Her cheeks Drawn A light pink, As if brushed with the petals of a daisy. Her lips, Those beautiful lips. Red as a summer sunset. Her beautiful body shimmered in the dim moonlight And his eyes were glued to her as he stepped forward. Shaking with unshed tears, He reached down Grasped one cold blue hand, The left. As was figured, The ring remained frozen to her finger. A thought came to mind: As long as she had the ring, He was hers, Forever, and ever, And she was his, Until the end of life as we know it. And as this was so, He realized he wanted to be in her world, To live his life out with her yet, Even if he had to live a different life. The reward, Her beauty, her love, Outweighed the cut of a knife.
chemical_redemption Posted November 1, 2011 Posted November 1, 2011 i like it. it makes you think and veiw somethings just a little differently.:j
Guest chloeisme! Posted November 2, 2011 Posted November 2, 2011 Thank you :] I think complexity makes people form their own opinions on what its about and come to their own conclusion what the message is :]
inyourskinnies Posted November 2, 2011 Posted November 2, 2011 That's so amazing chloe It was kind of an untold story, like you knew what happened even though it wasn't written out. I love it
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