Umm so yeahs :/ (not very good at writing poems) :/

[Guest Shevii]

(( Btw this would probs be really bad so if you have any tips or anything please say cause i'm not very good a writing poems... ))

Love

My heart longs for you

I hear your name everywhere I go

Every second becomes harder

But everyday makes me stronger

I know I hurt now

But I know the hurt will pass

eventually...

[CrimsonSpade57]

My advice is write what you want i use this forum to vent any and all emotion though i have no posts yet i did have an account last year and i wrote almost every day and my writings were differnt every day.Have fun do what you like make it ryme dont make it ryme its your feelings your thoughts write them how you feel not how everyone sais a poems sapost to be.

[Guest Shevii]

thanks that's a really good advice (:

Edited December 6, 2011 by Depressed_Emo_Chic

[CrimsonSpade57]

Your welcome and I'd love to read more of your work when you write some.

[Guest Shevii]

haha ummm well i have another one up that i put up earlier this week (called "without me")

[CrimsonSpade57]

You are a very good writer and i like this one and that one.

[Guest Shevii]

really? Thanks (:

[CrimsonSpade57]

Your welcome.

[Guest Shevii]

(: