Gazmo Posted January 15, 2012 Posted January 15, 2012 Your my everything My best friend My enemy My comfort My hurt My heaven My hell My life My death Your bitter sweet You make life better I love you so I should know better Don't want to stop I love the rush The pain, the blood It's not enough Don't say a word Keep the secret hidden They'll make you stop I'll be forbidden Deeper, deeper It's what I need Hope I never awake From this bittersweet dream
Hawt3m()Boi Posted January 15, 2012 Posted January 15, 2012 i thought it was good(a bit depressing) but still good :3
nickemoxo12 Posted January 16, 2012 Posted January 16, 2012 That was very...sweet nd real i would say... Makes me remember my forbiden love which i will never be able to kiss. Loved ur poem //.^
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