A Look Back

[Erasmas]

I wrote this almost two years ago, so it's not so great, but oh well! I'm just interested to hear your opinions.

 

A Look Back:

 

I sit now with no fear,

And all for no gain.

I ponder my time here

Like walking through rain.

Am I going insane?

I can't think of my past;

Only hurting and pain.

That's all I let last,

And yet I hold fast

To saying, "I'm fine,"

That lie that I cast.

It's addictive like wine,

So I drink all the time,

'Cause although it's untrue,

It's something that's mine.

No, it's not meant for you,

But it's sticking like glue,

So it holds me in place.

I just can't start anew,

And I can't see your face.

I fell down in the race,

And I dropped the ball,

And I don't see your face...

So I walk down these halls,

And I try to stand tall,

But it just doesn't work.

No, it won't work at all.

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

I luv it <3

Me jealous...

Im not great at poems but iv posted lyk four of my poems...seems lyk other ppl agree wiv me dat im not dat great...

[Erasmas]

I luv it <3

Me jealous...

Im not great at poems but iv posted lyk four of my poems...seems lyk other ppl agree wiv me dat im not dat great...

 

Thanks!

 

But I disagree with your conclusion. I just read your poems, and I like them! (I'll be posting on at least one of them shortly...) And it looked to me like people disagree with you; they said they liked your poems!

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

<3 <3 <3

Me lyk u hehe

[Guest Shevii]

Your such an amazing writer

i love this poem it's really good ^__^

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[Erasmas]

Your such an amazing writer

i love this poem it's really good ^__^

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Thank you! I hope I can live up to that expectation, but I don't think I'm very good. >_>

[Guest Shevii]

Well i think your good at writing them cant wait till you put more up (hopfully if your putting more up)