Erasmas Posted February 3, 2012 Posted February 3, 2012 I'm only satisfied with the last stanza of this one. -.- Someone who is better at writing should edit this. XD Apologies: I'm sorry I got out of bed. I should have gone back to my slumber instead. Every moment's a long night in my head. If I'm lucky, I'll sleep more when I'm dead. I'm sorry I stood up when I should have fled. I can't stand for all the anger we've bred. I don't regret a single thing that I've said, But I regret the fight to which they led. You said that you loved me. You said that you cared. In the dark you betrayed me, And I wasn't prepared.
Guest DaRKteddehbearvamp Posted February 5, 2012 Posted February 5, 2012 just that last stanza? are you sure?
xxxmeHaylliexxx Posted February 5, 2012 Posted February 5, 2012 i think really good...not just the last stanza but the whole thing
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