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Verse1

 

You yell and scream in my fac

e yet I still love you

You push and shove but I just feel sorry for you

I understand youre confused and stressd

I comfort you and give you everything

I give you my heart but you dont accept it

You just push me out of tge way and walk away

 

Chorus

 

 

I scream out your name in pain, over and over again

You do not hear my muffled cries, you do not care

My heart is beating out of my chest for you to come back

You left me here, drowning in my own tears, never to come back

I gave you everything and you chucked it away like it was nothing

 

Verse2

 

The door opens and you leave me in this small caving in room

You dont take a look back at me

You just left me with your yells and screams echoing in my ears

My chest aches and burns for you to come back

But you just kept walking off without a sign of guilt on your face

Leaving me to rip into thousands of shreds

 

(chorus)

 

Verse3

 

I scrape at the walls, breaking my nails into splinters

I scream out at the now empty world, hoping you would change your mind

The world is empty now since you disappeared, leaving me alone

This feeling of betrayal burns smoke out through my lungs and throat

It suffocates me, chokes me, I hope to die

You betrayed me

 

The shreds of me blow out through the window

Fleeing away from this place

Getting away from all the memories

Hoping to never face him and them again

Leaving everything behind just like what he did

 

Chorus2

 

I scream out your name in pain, over and over again

You do not hear my muffled cries, you do not care, you do not want to

My heart is beating out of my chest for you to come back, but you won't

You left me here, drowning in my own tears, never to come back, never to look back

I gave you everything and you chucked it away like it was nothing

 

You thought I was nothing

But I thought you were everything

I guess I was wrong

You betrayed me like it was nothing, like I was nothing

 

 

 

(totally fail with songs :3 )

Edited by EmoChelza
Posted

It's pre decent dude. No offence meant at all, but maybe you could expand your terminology a little more? "Scream" gets a little boring after a few times repetitive... Shriek, cry, howl, screech, bellow all fit. Hope that helps.

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