XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX Posted February 29, 2012 Posted February 29, 2012 (edited) Verse1 You yell and scream in my fac e yet I still love you You push and shove but I just feel sorry for you I understand youre confused and stressd I comfort you and give you everything I give you my heart but you dont accept it You just push me out of tge way and walk away Chorus I scream out your name in pain, over and over again You do not hear my muffled cries, you do not care My heart is beating out of my chest for you to come back You left me here, drowning in my own tears, never to come back I gave you everything and you chucked it away like it was nothing Verse2 The door opens and you leave me in this small caving in room You dont take a look back at me You just left me with your yells and screams echoing in my ears My chest aches and burns for you to come back But you just kept walking off without a sign of guilt on your face Leaving me to rip into thousands of shreds (chorus) Verse3 I scrape at the walls, breaking my nails into splinters I scream out at the now empty world, hoping you would change your mind The world is empty now since you disappeared, leaving me alone This feeling of betrayal burns smoke out through my lungs and throat It suffocates me, chokes me, I hope to die You betrayed me The shreds of me blow out through the window Fleeing away from this place Getting away from all the memories Hoping to never face him and them again Leaving everything behind just like what he did Chorus2 I scream out your name in pain, over and over again You do not hear my muffled cries, you do not care, you do not want to My heart is beating out of my chest for you to come back, but you won't You left me here, drowning in my own tears, never to come back, never to look back I gave you everything and you chucked it away like it was nothing You thought I was nothing But I thought you were everything I guess I was wrong You betrayed me like it was nothing, like I was nothing (totally fail with songs :3 ) Edited February 29, 2012 by EmoChelza
Ghostface Killah Posted March 1, 2012 Posted March 1, 2012 It's pre decent dude. No offence meant at all, but maybe you could expand your terminology a little more? "Scream" gets a little boring after a few times repetitive... Shriek, cry, howl, screech, bellow all fit. Hope that helps.
XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX Posted March 1, 2012 Author Posted March 1, 2012 Thanks...songs seem complicated to write -.- Urgh...poems r much easier..might just stick to dem...
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