lyrics

[issac monster]

i look in the mirror in fear at what ive become i know im diffrent and the monster is showing its been locked up for to long i sleep and see my nightmares of what ive become people are running and screaming in fear i realize as i wake that the monster is showing its self i look in the mirror in fear it waves and leaves me lying down cold and dying as it takes over i scream on the inside i fear i will not make it as the monster takes over i start to realize of what i have truly become i fight in my mind with it im fading into my own fears as the moster fights back i scream as i fear of what ive become it seeps into me i take another look into the mirror and i see the monster im no longer me its only a shell and the monster is living on the inside i can no longer fight back at what ive become now the moster is lying with in me

[Ghostface Killah]

It's decent. Next time, can you structure the lines a bit more, so peeps can read it better? And try expanding your terminology, and vocabulary a bit more. That always helps when you're funking the pen. Just some advice.