johnny63o Posted March 21, 2012 Posted March 21, 2012 (edited) U live and u feel Ur fate has already been sealed U hurt u cry That's how you know things aren't a lie The pain is a new scar It follows u wherever u are Its a reminder of who u are and what u have done Although it could mean life's only just begun Is it fate, destiny or consequences by action To me its just another life distraction Its an obstacle that some can get past For others that obstacle can be there last Don't let it stop u ur stronger then fate Its just another thing that u can hate Fate is something that u can rewrite Although it can take alot of heart and might Remember that u are ur life's master Just stay away from the road to disaster Edited March 21, 2012 by johnny63o 1
PurpleKitty Posted March 21, 2012 Posted March 21, 2012 OMFG!!! I LOVE it!! its sooo good and deep!!! reminds me of what im going through at the moment ........... Anyways really good!! you should write more poems!!
johnny63o Posted March 21, 2012 Author Posted March 21, 2012 Indo I have a notebook filled bt i rarely show others them lol
johnny63o Posted March 22, 2012 Author Posted March 22, 2012 Not really I dnt like this on much either
PurpleKitty Posted March 22, 2012 Posted March 22, 2012 awwww but I think its awesome!! its written really well! I never used to share my poems cause I write them based on what I feel, but now I just post them on here.... mine are not that good either >.<
johnny63o Posted March 22, 2012 Author Posted March 22, 2012 Its how I feel to in a weird complex way
PurpleKitty Posted March 22, 2012 Posted March 22, 2012 ah kay...I just write what I feel and it turns out as poems lol XD Erasmas said I must be Prophet and I argued then that if I was a prophet everyone who can write poems are prophets
.Dark. Posted August 5, 2012 Posted August 5, 2012 Johnny your poem is now on my blog. thanks for your support.
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