***MY EPIC FAIL OF A LIFE!***

[angelica]

My, life

my, buisness,

my fights

are serious

you told me

to stop trying

but i know that ur lying

i cant stop now

ive come too far

to push away...from all the doors standing ajar

im struggling to stand

but all i need is a push

to get my life back

get out of this rush..i hate all the drama

that life pushes on..

but mostly i hate the things i do wrong...

ive tried to change, get back on track, but alas all those things

come tumbling back...this poem really sux...tht is a fact!

[Erasmas]

Love it! It reads very well. +1

[angelica]

gee thnx..but idk not very talented in this region..though i have had a few put in the golden edition poetry book...just saying...idk i dont like alot of things...but thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!

[angelsofdarkness1]

Like your poetry

[angelica]

thanks....im not that good!

[PurpleKitty]

Its really good!! I love it!!! and it doesnt suck its a good poem!!

[Lake2279]

Luv it. U do not suck at poetry!

[angelica]

thnx you guys..xoxo....but idk..i try to be good...i just dont know...but thnx...hope to hear from you all..if ur not my friend then add me!

[angelica]

i wanna be famous...

have people know my name

havin to work my ass off,

if i want the fame..

people say i got the voice..

but its driving ME insane...

and even if i do...

what the hell does it matter

if i dont even get you????

you may not believe this....

but you are my song..

your what i look forward to

when everythings goin wrong

your keepin me up

when my worlds goin down

im fallin in shame....

Gotta get the FAME!

[angelica]

Well I love all you with great comments but looks like I may be done with emo puddle.....I'm gonna miss you all!

 

[angelica]

this is my last poem

i am sad to say

that im gonna miss you so much

you dont know how hard that is to say

i cant say im surprised

if youd look in my eyes

all of my life is told in lies

i need to breath

so i bid you farewell

all this time i spent in dwelling

this is my home

and this is my last poem.....