johnny63o Posted March 28, 2012 Posted March 28, 2012 I hate it when people say everything will be OK If that was true then I wouldn't feel this way This pain it aches deep in my chest I want it gone so I can rest If I could go a day without it slowly building inside I might be happy or at least I can try Its there in me but others can't see How much this pain has affected me They smile they grin and its always the same They say be happy yet they don't know my pain If they could feel it then theyd understand too Being happy isn't something I can easily do Be careful with words as they can be a powerful tool Just don't use them to do something cruel I've said them and felt them and they hurt people alot That's why I decided I'm going to stop I've said enough in my rambles above Goodnight dear strangers take heart and take love
Guest Dark Light * Posted March 28, 2012 Posted March 28, 2012 it is very good. thought the pacing could have been a little better.....but its still good nonetheless
johnny63o Posted March 28, 2012 Author Posted March 28, 2012 U really think so... o think this ones worse then my * fate is sealed* poem... I'm horrible at poems..
Guest chloeisme! Posted March 28, 2012 Posted March 28, 2012 Poems are only bad if theres no emotion :]
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