i hate myself

[VERDRINKINMYTRANE]

I hate myself

i have no wealth

no self worth

i resent my own birth

i lost what is dear

because of my fear

of lonlyness

our love was pure bluss

like heaven on earth

but i have no self worth

i lost u

My life is through

ill never love again

ur love is not the same

i ran away

had nothing to say

u noticed my empty space

ill miss ur face

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

sadface

but its gd

[PurpleKitty]

aww

but its good poem!

[VERDRINKINMYTRANE]

thx guys

[sarahcampbellwashere]

like it....a lot

[(BehindTheMask)]

I like it, but it's a bit scattered. Try to organize your thoughts more, like appearance in a couple lines one after the other, your fear and loneliness in a different section, and what it was like when you loved her in another one. Just my advice

[Catch&Release]

its good

[VERDRINKINMYTRANE]

_{thx for the advice}