Lost In Your Mind

[Erasmas]

Lost In Your Mind:

 

When the world goes dark at night

You find your way by candle-light,

But you can't see very far,

And fear becomes who you are.

Take a breath and look around,

Try to move without a sound.

Each step is another risk you take

Of being caught by the noise you make,

So you stop, freeze, and hold your breath,

While praying for a painless death,

But none will come--you'll have to fight,

Or if all else fails, end your life.

Either way, there's no easy way out

From the frightened state of fear and doubt--

The jungle of your own mind,

Where the memories you'd like to find

Are scratched and blurred by wishful thoughts,

Like lying to yourself but you'll always get caught.

So fine, try, crawl on the ground...

But once you're lost you won't be found.

[itsJayybitch]

this is good.

[PurpleKitty]

omgs!!! +1 for you!!! Im jelly your getting better at writing poems.... I think im getting worse >.<

I love it!! <3

[Guest Dark Light *]

i like this it's good.

[Erasmas]

Lol Thanks guys.

 

And Ash you know that's BS. XD As long as you write, you cannot get worse. You will always improve. Btw I am not going to comment on you recent poems since there are like three and I HATE this site from my phone. I have read them and they are great!

 

Also it won't let me +1 them? I click it and nothing happens.

[Erasmas]

Lol Thanks guys.

 

And Ash you know that's BS. XD As long as you write, you cannot get worse. You will always improve. Btw I am not going to comment on you recent poems since there are like three and I HATE this site from my phone. I have read them and they are great!

 

Also it won't let me +1 them? I click it and nothing happens.

[the darkangle]

It's really good

[PurpleKitty]

Lol Thanks guys.

 

And Ash you know that's BS. XD As long as you write, you cannot get worse. You will always improve. Btw I am not going to comment on you recent poems since there are like three and I HATE this site from my phone. I have read them and they are great!

 

Also it won't let me +1 them? I click it and nothing happens.

 

hahaha its not BS XD

nah s'kay nice to know you read them

phones are spaz when it comes to ep lol