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Posted

Why do I keep running back to you,

After all the shit you put me through?

You lie, you cheat, and you deceive

You made your lies easy to believe

 

You told me what I wanted to hear

That you loved me, needed me, held me dear

But the truth is I was just another toy

For a heartless, cruel, manipulative boy

 

But the problem is, I fell for you

Your smile, your warmth, the things you do

I never wanted you to let go of me

Desperately now I need to be set free

 

From the painful clutches of my undying love

That used to seem like it was sent from above

 

Need a good ending! Help!

Posted

It is very good indeed!

 

...

 

I struggle to run, to escape your embrace,

But the memory of you, I cannot erase.

 

...

 

Now seems cold to the touch and leaves a bad taste,

But even if it hurts, it was not a waste.

 

...

 

Leave me cold, hungry, lost and afraid,

That never again will love come my way.

 

...

 

Anyways, just some of my bad attempts for you. XD

Posted

Hehe, they were actually three separate ideas... To be used as one it would need to be modified, because they were written to follow the last thing you wrote and hardly make sense otherwise. Also, Catch/Release's endings are better anyways. xD fo sho

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