my frist poem

[luna]

I'm not sure how good it is but here's my first poem

 

 

Tomorrow morning when I wake

My fragile heart will surely break

Because when I open up my eyes

I’ll become aware to all your lies

 

So when I wake up at six a.m.

I will fall in to darkness once again

So kiss me once before you leave

While I still rest my soul at peace

 

It’s six a.m. and what do I see

Your genital form sleeping next to me

My heart soars nearly out of my chest

I lay back down my mind at rest

[PurpleKitty]

Its really good!!! I love it!! keep up the good work ^.^ your a natural

[luna]

thank you

[Erasmas]

Yeah, pretty good for your first poem!

[xRokzanneMyScarsDontFadexx]

the first two stanza were amazing, and for ur first poem imma give 10/10

[luna]

tank us all