Erasmas Posted April 16, 2012 Posted April 16, 2012 Some lyrics I just wrote... Song #2 (The Makeup Lies) The makeup on your face Is a lie told to erase The truth written so clearly, Protecting hopes you hold so dearly. And every second spent Pretending that you meant The things you said to fool me Doesn't feel the way love should be. Ohh, I don't know, Is it supposed to hurt this bad? Ohh, I can't tell If I'm happy or I'm sad Without you Do you feel this way too? I tried holding up my end, But you just played pretend, So while I fell in love You were feasting on my blood. Why don't we try again? I would be just as sad then. I remember to this day, Watching you walk away. Ohh, I don't know, Is it supposed to hurt this bad? Ohh, I can't tell If I'm happy or I'm sad Without you Do you feel this way too? I know it hurts to talk about my feelings, But I can't ignore them boiling inside. So if seeing you again will start the healing, Then it might make up for every time you lied. Ohh, I don't know, Is it supposed to hurt this bad? Ohh, I can't tell If I'm happy or I'm sad Without you Do you feel this way too?
Ghostface Killah Posted April 16, 2012 Posted April 16, 2012 Good flow. I can envision the instrumental already xD Once again, simple words, but effective and meaningful.
Erasmas Posted April 16, 2012 Author Posted April 16, 2012 Well since Ash is using her usual lines I will too: WRONG! But thanks Tiana. xD
PurpleKitty Posted April 17, 2012 Posted April 17, 2012 Well since Ash is using her usual lines I will too: WRONG! But thanks Tiana. xD >.> It flows really well and it has true depth and meaning behind it! Its not WRONG!! Its really good!! and I love it!!
Erasmas Posted April 17, 2012 Author Posted April 17, 2012 Hahaha, you know I am just trying to irritate you, right? XD Thank yooouuu ash. XD
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