Godsent

[Erasmas]

Godsent:

 

Godsent --

Falling through you

In absence,

Like trying to

Hold on

To thoughts I had,

Long gone,

Like you, but less sad.

It's priceless,

Sitting here feeling so

Hopeless,

Waiting to go...

 

The angel cries too --

My tears fall for you.

You bathe in their rain,

Cleansing yourself in my pain.

The flame dies as well,

But there's more flame in Hell,

So if it's a choice that you make,

Choose me for your own sake;

And when God calls you in,

You best not ignore him,

Or he sends angels like me

To make sure you believe.

[PurpleKitty]

+1 for you I love it!!!

[Erasmas]

Haha. Bs, this is one of my worst. XD

[PurpleKitty]

No its not!!! I really like this part:

 

The angel cries too --

My tears fall for you.

You bathe in their rain,

Cleansing yourself in my pain

 

I think it has depth and I love it