Teenage Bleeding Daylight Posted April 26, 2012 Posted April 26, 2012 (edited) people like robots all emotions forgot no feelings, just empathy all hope goes away shame fades into nothing attention shown, cries let out people look but don't speek out] held down and stalked notes seald by a lock screams are cried people walk by green with envy gray with dout red with anger that makes you shout Edited April 26, 2012 by Teenage Bleeding Daylight
PurpleKitty Posted April 28, 2012 Posted April 28, 2012 besides from the fact that this should have been posted in the "poems and lyrics" forum its good I like it!
Teenage Bleeding Daylight Posted May 22, 2012 Author Posted May 22, 2012 yea i i clicked the wrong thing
XrosesXXdieXXbleedingXX Posted May 24, 2012 Posted May 24, 2012 i like the middle stanza group, nice work
XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX Posted June 4, 2012 Posted June 4, 2012 a poem is creative so cares if its in this forum... it good
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