Song #3 (Redemption)

[Erasmas]

Song #3 (Redemption):

 

You linger in my mind.

I'm screaming on the inside.

Broken glass covers my floor.

I'm running out of time

To escape the daily grind

Of begging you not to walk out the door.

 

This is a story of losing my love --

A tale of an angel sent from above.

Love made in haste, redemption in blood.

Every time I remember, I cry like I should.

 

Another day falls through the cracks

Of memories I can't take back.

And the pain of losing you is real.

I hear your voice inside my head

Telling me I should be dead.

But that hasn't changed the way I feel.

 

This is a story of losing my love --

A tale of an angel sent from above.

Love made in haste, redemption in blood.

Every time I remember, I cry like I should.

 

One last hour spent alone,

A final moment on my own.

My life, an enemy to slay.

Finally I let go,

And what do you know,

Dying's not as bad as they say.

 

This is a story of losing my love --

A tale of an angel sent from above.

Love made in haste, redemption in blood.

Every time I remember, I cry like I should.

[PurpleKitty]

Its really good! it flows well and has depth I love it! +1 for you

[Guest Dark Light *]

It's good. I like it.

[Erasmas]

Thanks guys.