Erasmas Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 Night Vision: I fell apart in your embrace, Led astray by my own lies -- My hand softly against your face, Staring into your eyes. So much comfort in that memory, A moment purchased with pain. Now your presence leaves me, Just like the sleep I feign. So uncontrollably me -- Always falling over myself into you. How undeniably me -- With your mark on everything I do. Do you think of me in your dreams, Or do you only have nightmares? Do you hate me as it seems, Or do you just not care? I find myself waking in the night, Wondering if you are okay -- Hoping you would make it right, But always, I must wait another day.
PurpleKitty Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 +1 !!!! I LOVE IT!!!! so deep and really well written!!
Erasmas Posted April 30, 2012 Author Posted April 30, 2012 Lol Thanks. It is one of my personal favorites. When I was writing it, it seemed awkward and mediocre, but after reading it, I am unusually satisfied with the outcome, lol. Thanks again.
PurpleKitty Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 s'kay its really good haha Its one of my favourites of yours!! you really are good at writing poems
Erasmas Posted April 30, 2012 Author Posted April 30, 2012 Haha, I am not very good. Still learning, lol. I like yours and Catch&Release's, but tbh I quit reading most of the others because I got sick of how many were posted in blocky paragraphs or just sucked. XD So I basically just read from the authors I know are good, lol.
PurpleKitty Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 Haha well one can never stop learning.... im still learning too thats funny cause I have stopped reading others except for Catch&Release and yours xD I would read others when im extremely bored but generally wouldnt be bothered replying unless it was really good.... ^.^
Erasmas Posted April 30, 2012 Author Posted April 30, 2012 Oh, but to clarify, I am not saying thay the others are all bad -- just that enough are to annoy me. XD
PurpleKitty Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 hahaha yeah xD yeah its not letting me do it for some reason O.o it mean!! i will +1 as soon as it lets me kay? it says i have reached my positive quota for the day or sumfin....but i havent used them O.o weird
Erasmas Posted April 30, 2012 Author Posted April 30, 2012 YOU'RE STEALING MY +1 AND HIDING IT, AREN'T YOU?
PurpleKitty Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!! I WOULD NEVER DO THAT >.<
PurpleKitty Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 you will get your +1 I promise!!! I dont break promises.....
Guest Dark Light * Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 ahh, it seems as though i missed out on a party here. The poem is good. I like it. +1 and whatnot.
PurpleKitty Posted April 30, 2012 Posted April 30, 2012 +1 for you Erasmas!! told ya you would get one from me
Erasmas Posted April 30, 2012 Author Posted April 30, 2012 Hahaha, thanks to both of you. But Light, next time I throw a party you better show up.
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