my song

[SouthernBell<3]

Watching this day pass by knowing that soon it will be time to die wishing I had more time but not knowing what to with the time that's already mine. Always alone in my pain drowning in the sorrows of my pass. Looking around waiting for answers to questions nobody heard me ask. Screaming to the sky is this what I get for being who I am for hurting myself for crushing the hearts of others trying to hide what was really going on in my heart all those years is that why I stand alone is that why I have a hole where i once had a heart of love but I let all that go and now I stand alone waiting for my time to come waiting to feel nothing...

 

(thats not the whole song I'm still working on it)

[Bloody Shadow]

It's lovely so far.

[SouthernBell<3]

thanks

[Ghostface Killah]

Try to structure it a bit, so it's easier to read.

[SouthernBell<3]

I shall try

[SouthernBell<3]

Watching this day pass by knowing that soon it will be time to die

wishing I had more time but not knowing what to with the time that's already mine.

Always alone in my pain drowning in the sorrows of my pass.

Looking around waiting for answers to questions nobody heard me ask.

Screaming to the sky is this what I get for being who I am

for hurting myself for crushing the hearts of others

trying to hide what was really going on in my heart all those years is that why I stand alone is that why I have a hole where I once had a heart of love

but I let it all that go and now I stand alone waiting for my time to come waiting to feel nothing...

I have already dug my grave and I would pay somebody to cover me but no one is around

So I sit and drowning in pain listening to the wind

trying to look back at a time where life actually made me smile

But I don't remember if that's the true or just a distant dream I had once upon a time

 

 

(there hope that's better)