Erasmas Posted May 4, 2012 Posted May 4, 2012 When The Loving Is Done: I fall so far. You're on the ground. I missed my mark. You held me down. So what do you want? What more can I say? I gave you my heart, And you threw it away. Somewhere I'm lost In the great unkown. But with you on my mind I'm never alone. So light up your torch. Come burn me down. I won't even fight. Just end it right now. I wrote my last words In blood on my wall, Because if I die tonight It won't matter at all. The bullets sink in, And you hold the gun. I guess love is a weapon When the loving is done. And if a bullet-proof vest Means forgetting your name, Then the man I've become Would not be the same. So if given the chance, I would not change a thing, Because the joy that we knew Was worth the pain it would bring.
PurpleKitty Posted May 4, 2012 Posted May 4, 2012 +1 I love it!!! its really good!! deep and well written
PurpleKitty Posted May 4, 2012 Posted May 4, 2012 wha? why would anyone do that!! they wouldnt do that!!! your not a loser
Erasmas Posted May 4, 2012 Author Posted May 4, 2012 Haha it is at +1 now. So I guess someone must have +1'd it too. I was calling the -1 person a loser. I mean why the heck would you -1 a poem. XD
PurpleKitty Posted May 4, 2012 Posted May 4, 2012 haha yeah..... I +1 it when I got home....stupid school computer was lying to meh >.<
Erasmas Posted May 4, 2012 Author Posted May 4, 2012 Thanks! And no, once I get a poem going I usually finish it pretty quickly. It is coming up with ideas that takes me a while.
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