My poem

[Rockerchick22]

It drips so bad it's scarlet red my life will soon end I seen it coming there was a chance you could have saved me but now I'm dead I feel I'm floating my heart is broken my soul is tourn I have reached my end I suffocated in my life but I got the knife it ripped my heart their goes my blood dripping slowly then a flood the last thing I saw before I floated away was your face you were smiling

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

i like it but it be easier to read if u wrote it up in stanzas not just one paragraph...it gd thou

[PurpleKitty]

its good but as chelza said would be easier to read in stanzas

[emopunk420]

is very good