emopunk420 Posted May 14, 2012 Posted May 14, 2012 When the war is over And life has come to pass And the dust has settled On relics of the past The sky shades of orange As dawn turns to dusk Dead skeletons lay watching Cursed by greed and lust To the east lies the forests And the west is the ocean Worlds sit at rest Wind and wave, only motion In stillness man awakens Impure and born for death No remorce, No mercy Man breaths his final breath... 1
Erasmas Posted May 15, 2012 Posted May 15, 2012 ^About sums it up! Love the meaning, love the flow, love it all. One of the best I have read on here.
Monster The Zombie Bunny Posted June 2, 2012 Posted June 2, 2012 I it! i love everything about ur poem :3 ur poetry is amazing
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