wondering bout death

[PurpleKitty]

Sometimes I just sit there and cry

Sometimes I just wanting to die

Sometimes I just sit there and cry

Sometimes I just watch those who die

 

I wonder what its like

Having the pain end

Not having to fend for others

But to really have everything end

 

No pain, no strain

No joy, no love

Just endless darkness

As far as the eye can see

 

Blood stains my hands

From the blade I hold

Trying to end it all

I sit there and cry

 

The blood shows my pain

It shows my faults

Its not scared of my mistakes

It doesnt hold anything against me

[Erasmas]

Fix that second line. xd otherwise, love it!

[PurpleKitty]

haha kay

 

*Sometimes I just sit there and cry

Sometimes just wanting to die

Sometimes I just sit there and cry

Sometimes I just watch those who die*

 

(it wouldnt let me edit it >.> )

[XXlovemeXX]

So deep I loved it

[PurpleKitty]

thanks

[Kairi]

one of the things i love about you ash is your creative side. and this poem shows it. nice

[PurpleKitty]

Hahaha thanks

[the darkangle]

sad but very deep i like