The Trance

[Erasmas]

I always write about things I know -- feelings I have or have had in the past. Also, my poetry usually focuses on flow and structure. well, this one is about the way I feel all the time, but it is very slow, emotional, almost dark, and has little in the way of flow.

 

The Trance:

 

My liberty, I surrender --

I choose not to be free --

To spend my time with you;

So that you may control me.

 

In your presence,

I find solace in being lost.

Your love is worth buying

If my soul is the cost.

 

Like a deep sleep,

I am dreaming all the time;

And the pain of waking up

Is no concern of mine.

 

Somewhere I will be found,

Alone, but thinking of you;

So sure, oh so sure,

That even in death, my love was true.

[PurpleKitty]

+1 its good ^.^ I like it

[Ghostface Killah]

Only some people can pull off simple poems while simultaneously making them look beautiful. You're talented kid.

[Erasmas]

Wow, I am flattered. Thank you -- very much.