I think i might call it 'Flawless'

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

Soft, pale skin the texture and shade of pearls,

Sharp fangs gleaming, the tongue curls,

Dark, cold eyes the colour of black coal,

The flawless body of a living dead doll.

 

Eyes staring right into all your blood beating veins,

Your pulse thumping loud, no blood will remain,

Their crave for your warm blood dripping down their tongues,

And the scream of pain escaping from your lungs.

[PurpleKitty]

Thats really good chelza ^.^ I like it

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

i actually like this one...

but u always say that nya

[MeowKittyRawr]

Thts awesome n_n

[PurpleKitty]

i actually like this one...

but u always say that nya

 

Its cause you always imporoving your poems

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

i only get random times that they turn out good....like this one...kinda thought it was a fluke...

 

Thts awesome n_n

 

fanku