Lost In Regret

[XxZombiShadowxX]

Can't breathe, can't sleep, drowning in my own memories. Can't feel, can't think, it feels like my fault, so I continue to sink. Slower and slower, lower I go, and when I hit the bottom, I challenge my foe. The mirror is cracked, the haunting is back, so now I'm dead as snow. I am lost in regret, I am soaking wet, in my own fucking mind. Try to wrap my mind into the test of time before I start drowning again.

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

sounds pre cool...just put it in stanzas (paragraphs)

[PurpleKitty]

its good but would be better if in stanzas