My dear old friend

[emodory]

You toyed with my mind u stompped on my heart, the truth can never b set free form u, the lies u tell seem so real, ur soul... U have no soul u carry on ur troubled mind all ur innocents u left behind ur childhood past. What u have become a loser that u r emotions u hide behind physically haunting u what have u become my dear old friend.

[PurpleKitty]

its good but one piece of advice, put it into stanzas and will make it easier and better to read but besides from that its good and i like it!!!