FleshEatingMellow Posted July 23, 2012 Posted July 23, 2012 I Love The Pouring Rain Pitter patter sounds punish the pavement as the rain falls down His heaving weeps barely make a sound Out in the middle of the road a boy frowns He clutches his armas his face wound The murmer of the night sky brings him breif felicity Another yell pierces the night Years inside this house has brought him toxicity His parents have only begun to fight In the distance a faint humming stays out of sight To himself he abrades He languidly stammers down two yellow stripes His broken home will never fade He looks back to see the window lights An evanescent car blares from behind The sounds of the screeching tires is coarse The narrow headlights keep him confined His hushed screams are growing hoarse A silhouette is still behind the boy Landscape started to abrade The stars and moon began to swirl His life has fade 1
emopunk420 Posted July 23, 2012 Posted July 23, 2012 im 16 and i know what thats like... great poem tho!!
endofgreen15 Posted July 23, 2012 Posted July 23, 2012 (edited) LOL? So this is you? http://www.blogger.com/profile/15361630225609557392 your blog? http://krispitto.blo...m/p/poetry.html Edited July 23, 2012 by Endofgreen15
Guest XxxxImmamonsterxxxx Posted August 4, 2012 Posted August 4, 2012 I love it its really deep too good job
endofgreen15 Posted August 8, 2012 Posted August 8, 2012 obviously NONE of you payed attention to my first post.........
PurpleKitty Posted August 8, 2012 Posted August 8, 2012 so this person is fake? O.o or posting someone else's poems naughty naughty
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