Guest Moon_Panda Posted August 16, 2012 Posted August 16, 2012 Whatever hope was left, they took it away. they burnt a hole right through his sole, and left him out in the cold. they hurt him so bad that in the end, pain was the only friend he had. he couldn't hide his scars, so everyone stayed far. they looked at him as somekind of freak they thaught he was beaten, broken and weak. they weren't wrong one more bad thing and boom... he was dead. no coffin or tombstone he was gone from theyr perfect home. no sad little ceremony noone to cry for him he was just forgotten but in the end it didn't realy matter. but now where ever he is heaven or hell, he knows the truth you can't be happy when all you have is noone.
PurpleKitty Posted August 16, 2012 Posted August 16, 2012 its really good I like it ^.^ keep up the good work
Guest Moon_Panda Posted August 17, 2012 Posted August 17, 2012 thanks for all the positive feedback, this makes me smile.
Lost Love Lyrics Posted August 17, 2012 Posted August 17, 2012 i really like it Markus its deep and painfully true,keep writing,ohs,and smiling thats important too
Purple Ink Posted August 24, 2012 Posted August 24, 2012 This poem was really cool. I enjoyed it very much........... HUZZAH!!!
Xx_Storm_xX Posted September 28, 2012 Posted September 28, 2012 Big ups! Loving the honesty and truth. Keep writing.
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