Dragons Exalted #2

[Purple Ink]

Ok that first one was really just kind of a tryal so if yer readin dis, hope ya like it. Maby it's a bit better.

 

 

Crooked Wings

 

Birds of a feather, nothing but lies and darkness,

Open your wings, open your eyes,

Hoping to find a soul,

Death comes on crooked wings.

Only salvation,

Only way out,

The face in darks reflection,

What we believe in,

What we all wait for,

Death comes on crooked wings.

Long have we awaited,

This final salvation,

Long have we suffered,

This tormenting place,

Death comes on crooked wings.

[XxPocketSizedEmoVampirexX]

it cool xD

[Guest Moon_Panda]

ITs very good. hope you keep writng

[thatguy]

It clearly isn't you. just doesn't sound right, Relax when next writing and don't lie to yourself

[Purple Ink]

I don't really think I'm lying to myself or anyone else I'm just that cussing wierd...... btw thanks for da positive feedback peeps!!