poem

[Rockerchick22]

Dear world,

What do you see in me,

I dream of colors greater than blue,yellow,and green,

What if i stare at the sky,

Wait for it to drop when I cry,

when my heart brakes and cracks,

it's turning slowly,

going blacker than black,

why why o why sweet,crappy,world,

why cant i breath,

why wont I find that place I long,

to be me,

to sing my siren song,

there's no one near like me,

no one else who I wish could see,

My colors fade,

My eyes change,

I wish to meet some one in this deserted place,

So dear world,

what do you see,

Becouse when I look in the mirror,

there's only me.

[SuicideRoom]

I really love this. It's so raw and deep with emotion and very convicting. Besides the few grammatical errors it's perfect. Love it.

[Storm]

I really love this. It's so raw and deep with emotion and very convicting. Besides the few grammatical errors it's perfect. Love it.

I agree

[Rockerchick22]

thanks