Fate

[Storm]

Is this heaven?

Is this hell?

I'm happy.

Can't you tell.

 

I'm smiling.

Does it look real?

How much pain do I feel?

My heart is dying.

 

I will not bleed.

I will smile through this hate.

I will be freed.

I will control my fate.

 

I have no emotion.

I have no life.

Sworn by devotion.

I was born to die.

 

I hear them cry as my body crumbles.

I feel their eyes as my veins run dry.

I feel the pain as the knife falls.

Hear the scream as my life tumbles.

I wasn't ready to die so young,

But they needed a sacrafice to survive this life.

Edited September 17, 2012 by Vanessa Danielle

[.Dark.]

Nice poem. I'm not a fan of rhyming but I do like it. Keep writing

[Storm]

I'm not really a fan of rhyming either but if it comes to me I'm going to write it down and thanks