Youngblood Posted October 19, 2012 Posted October 19, 2012 She is ignored She is suicidal She is stressed She is confused She is fucked up She is depressed She is misunderstood She is tired but still living She is hurt but won't show it She is screaming but is silent She is in pain but still smiling She is me
Silent Posted October 19, 2012 Posted October 19, 2012 He is ignored He is suicidal He is stressed He is confused He is fucked up He is depressed He is misunderstood He is tired but still living He is hurt but won't show it He is screaming but is silent He is in pain but still smiling He is me i liked the poem so decided to make a male version. Hope you don't mind.
Guest sigh* Posted October 19, 2012 Posted October 19, 2012 i really liked you poem i can relate to it deeply
Youngblood Posted October 22, 2012 Author Posted October 22, 2012 He is ignored He is suicidal He is stressed He is confused He is fucked up He is depressed He is misunderstood He is tired but still living He is hurt but won't show it He is screaming but is silent He is in pain but still smiling He is me i liked the poem so decided to make a male version. Hope you don't mind. It's cool your version is cool
Storm Posted October 22, 2012 Posted October 22, 2012 She is constantly ignored She is enduringly suicidal She is forever stressed She is broken and confused She is fucked up used She is lost in her depression She is continuely misunderstood She is tired but still barely living She is hurt but won't show it She is screaming but is silent She is in pain but still lying by smiling She is me It was a good poem so I put it in my version hope you don't mind
Guest Moon_Panda Posted October 22, 2012 Posted October 22, 2012 all three are awsum, but i can only relate to the male version
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