Just a poem I wrote :/

[Kittie-alisah]

But the tears rolling from my eyes

There nothing but they symbolize,

What's happened in my past,

And to cut was there and fast,

It relieved me from my pain

And my suffering was just a gain,

To show them that I gave in

But I couldn't let them win,

I had to end it there and then

Just to hang there... For ten...

Ten days till they discovered

That I had been dead

That shows I'm listless

Just as useless

As I've ever been.

[Gorgoroth]

i love this poem

[Kittie-alisah]

Thank you, I wrote it when I was half asleep and it took my mind if if everything els so I didn't think it was good

[Gorgoroth]

well i thinks its awesome especially if you were half asleep(that shows talent)

[Kittie-alisah]

Lol thanks

[Gorgoroth]

Lol thanks

 

no prob

[punk301]

Is this your first poem?

[Catch&Release]

Really good. I love it

[Kittie-alisah]

Yesh thi is my first poem and thank you