SaveRockMixpop Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 I wear a maskto split two worldsthe present and pastone u seeone I've seenthe one u see is like a dreamone I've seen is a nightmare caged in lock and keybut inside me.this thing that shakes and raddlesviolentlyit bites and scratches me.this thing that makes me sickbeg and pleadu till I bleed.can u see these tears upon my cheeksdo u see what they really mean.they are screamsa sound these lips cant makefor your sake... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shypanda Posted January 7, 2013 Share Posted January 7, 2013 Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Dark. Posted January 7, 2013 Share Posted January 7, 2013 I love it. the spacing of stanza's and the way it flows to create the feeling it has. I love it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaveRockMixpop Posted January 7, 2013 Author Share Posted January 7, 2013 Uhh thanks:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VisuallyBeautiful Posted January 7, 2013 Share Posted January 7, 2013 i like it. Linguistic masterpiece-ery xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hi-c Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 jaaaaaaaaaadddddddeeee!!! why didn't you tell me you could write!XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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