BEHIND THE MASK I AM SCARED

[SaveRockMixpop]

I wear a mask
to split two worlds
the present and past

one u see
one I've seen

the one u see is like a dream
one I've seen is a nightmare caged in lock and key
but inside me.

this thing that shakes and raddles
violently
it bites and scratches me.

this thing that makes me sick
beg and plead
u till I bleed.

can u see these tears upon my cheeks
do u see what they really mean.
they are screams
a sound these lips cant make
for your sake...
 

[Shypanda]

Nice.

[.Dark.]

I love it. the spacing of stanza's and the way it flows to create the feeling it has. I love it XD

[SaveRockMixpop]

Uhh thanks:)

[VisuallyBeautiful]

i like it. Linguistic masterpiece-ery xD

[hi-c]

jaaaaaaaaaadddddddeeee!!! why didn't you tell me you could write!XD