iiRainbows Posted June 20, 2013 Share Posted June 20, 2013 Hell is empty, All the demons and beasts, Are trapped here in the abyss of our own minds. I could not ask to be saved, With all the harm I made The idea seems rather impossible. Once my only salvation was… pain Death seemed so close to me, I felt like I could hold its hand.. Still I found my shining light, It is you my dear, always And always will be you. You took my pain You took my sorrow You stole my anger And you made me have a new tomorrow. This feeling we share, it’s something so special Mear words cannot describe it, so I’ll just put it like this: You rescued me from the pit in which I laid to waste Made me shine a light thought the darkness, I could only hope that you’d share this feeling with me forever I could only hope that it won’t end, ever. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Alternative ending: Still I lost my shred of light, It is you my dear, always And always has been you. You loved my pain You fed off my sorrow You raised my anger And you made me wish for new tomorrow. It’s time to unleash the dark To finally kill the Light’s spark Join me and we will cause destruction together Join me and I will make this feeling last forever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxKinleyxx Posted June 22, 2013 Share Posted June 22, 2013 Awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leelovesher Posted June 23, 2013 Share Posted June 23, 2013 amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iiRainbows Posted June 24, 2013 Author Share Posted June 24, 2013 Aww thank you u////////u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NyxJinx Posted February 12, 2016 Share Posted February 12, 2016 This is beautiful...I relate most with the alternate ending. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--Mgiez-- Posted February 29, 2016 Share Posted February 29, 2016 I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tori_lovesmagnum Posted March 8, 2016 Share Posted March 8, 2016 wow your so talented oh my gosh :0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToSaltTheSoilTurnsTheSun Posted April 13, 2016 Share Posted April 13, 2016 I like it very much, it has great rhythm and emotion. I like the image of hell being empty because everything awful that used the live there is really inside of us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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