iiRainbows Posted June 20, 2013 Posted June 20, 2013 Hell is empty, All the demons and beasts, Are trapped here in the abyss of our own minds. I could not ask to be saved, With all the harm I made The idea seems rather impossible. Once my only salvation was… pain Death seemed so close to me, I felt like I could hold its hand.. Still I found my shining light, It is you my dear, always And always will be you. You took my pain You took my sorrow You stole my anger And you made me have a new tomorrow. This feeling we share, it’s something so special Mear words cannot describe it, so I’ll just put it like this: You rescued me from the pit in which I laid to waste Made me shine a light thought the darkness, I could only hope that you’d share this feeling with me forever I could only hope that it won’t end, ever. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Alternative ending: Still I lost my shred of light, It is you my dear, always And always has been you. You loved my pain You fed off my sorrow You raised my anger And you made me wish for new tomorrow. It’s time to unleash the dark To finally kill the Light’s spark Join me and we will cause destruction together Join me and I will make this feeling last forever.
NyxJinx Posted February 12, 2016 Posted February 12, 2016 This is beautiful...I relate most with the alternate ending.
ToSaltTheSoilTurnsTheSun Posted April 13, 2016 Posted April 13, 2016 I like it very much, it has great rhythm and emotion. I like the image of hell being empty because everything awful that used the live there is really inside of us.
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