You and I(torn apart)

[Capn_Chantal]

You and I

He holds her hand through the whole thing

something less of comfort

it pains her to see him like this

closed off, dark

it haunts her to know

how much he really cares

it's like there's no one else

just her

just him

the world around them simply empty

seems lonely,seems hopeless

but without him she knows,

she'd drift away

the wind a powerful friend

takes her down and far

from all the places she's been

and he would never last a day without her

for remember she's all he has

the one thing keeping him alive

this my darling, is like you and i.

 

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- the echoes(torn apart)

[MichealaSweetest_Scars]

i love this :3

[Capn_Chantal]

thank you Mika

i haven't written a poem in a long time. i was scared to post this one cuz i thought no one would like it

Edited December 9, 2011 by xXChantalXx

[Panty Raid]

I dnt like it :/......

I LUBBS IT!!! hehe :3

[Guest Emo4Lyf]

Given I'm a picky sod... there's a bazillion things I'd change, correct, blah blah blah.. but lets not get into that. This is actually pretty good, well done =) I like it.