Lyn-Z Way Posted February 15, 2012 Posted February 15, 2012 Okay so this is a song I wrote when I wasn't feeling too good. Plus, I had insomnia and I was bored. I'd appreciate comments. When the lights go out, There's nothing to say, With what more about, You wanted to play, A little song that we Know more than you; The little lyrics are slain As you go for the truth "I never meant to hurt you baby" That's what you said to me "I meant for it to be so painless, Not how it wound up to be." Wake me From this comatose, Waking up From a little sleepy doze Save me From this Overdose Save me Save me When it's cold outside, I want you to know I'll be safe inside This hospital room Shedding tear after tear From nightmares alone If I feel that you're near, I'll be picking up the telephone What I need Is a lifetime to life in When I lead The dead to be forgiven Wake me From this comatose Waking up From a little sleepy doze Save me From this Overdose Save me Save me Save me This overdose, Like a comatose, Sets me to doze away around the room This overdose Sets down my pulse It's getting close But I know I gotta go This overdose, Like a comatose, Sets me to doze away around the room This overdose Sets down my pulse It's getting close But I know I gotta go I know I gotta go Wake me From this comatose Waking up From a little sleepy doze Save me From this Overdose Save me Save me Wake me From this comatose Waking up From a little sleepy doze Save me From this overdose Save me Save me Thanks for reading
AlexxBiteMe Posted February 23, 2012 Posted February 23, 2012 I love this, Its beautiful:D You should defo be a songwriter babe!
Lyn-Z Way Posted February 29, 2012 Author Posted February 29, 2012 I love this, Its beautiful:D You should defo be a songwriter babe! Thank you so much!
PurpleKitty Posted February 29, 2012 Posted February 29, 2012 (edited) I love it!! <3 your really good Edited February 29, 2012 by Purple Witch
emo_people_rule-_- Posted February 29, 2012 Posted February 29, 2012 It was really good I think that you should sing or have someone you want to sing it so we know how it is supposed to flow.
Lyn-Z Way Posted March 4, 2012 Author Posted March 4, 2012 It was really good I think that you should sing or have someone you want to sing it so we know how it is supposed to flow. I was planning on it eventually. Glad you like it!
Lyn-Z Way Posted March 4, 2012 Author Posted March 4, 2012 I love it!! <3 your really good Thank you so much! It means a lot.
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